The Writing Process

The draft is to put what you completed during the rewriting process into your own sentences. It is not your final project and mistakes are allowed.

On one sunny afternoon my father took our family to an amusement park. I love riding rides. i am excited to have fun all day long. We went to go on the swaying dragon because it is my favorite. My brother was way to scared to ride it I held his hand. Once we got as high as the rollercoaster could go I put my hands in the air and screamed. We ate alot of funnel cakes and hotdogs that day. It was one of the best days ever.

As a class, we will revise this paragraph the proper way.

> On one sunny afternoon, my father took our family to an amusement park. I love riding rollercoasters. I am excited to have fun all day long.

> We went to go on the Swaying Dragon because it is my favorite. My brother was way too scared to ride it, so I held his hand. Once we got as high as the rollercoaster could go, I put my hands in the air and screamed. The ride lasted a few minutes and then we went on to the next rollercoaster. After a couple of hours passed by, we ate a tasty lunch.

> We ate fluffy funnel cakes and grilled hotdogs. We were stuffed and ready to go home and take a big nap. It was one of the best times I have ever spent with my family.

Once you have gone through all of the correct steps you will write your final draft on paper and then type it in a google doc and print it out.