Grammar Review

Claudia, her broken phone in hand as she walked to the door.

Claudia, because her broken phone in hand as she walked to the door.

Claudia her broken phone in hand as she walked to the door.

Claudia, her broken phone in hand as she walked to the door, seemed upset.

The committee is going to give its presentation on Tuesday.

The committee is going to give their presentation on Tuesday.

The committee is going to give your presentation on Tuesday.

The committee is going to give it's presentation on Tuesday.

Because their car was in the shop.

The car that was theirs in the shop.

Because the shop had their car.

Their car was in the shop because it broke down.

It would be a shame if Justin Bieber forgot his own birthday.

It would be a shame if Justin Bieber forgot himself own birthday.

It would be a shame if Justin Bieber himself forgot own birthday.

It would be a shame if he Justin Bieber forgot own birthday.

Walking home alone at night, the trees looked like creepy monsters.

Walking home alone at night, the creepy monsters looked like they were coming out of the trees.

Walking home alone at night, Evelyn thought the trees looked like creepy monsters.

Walking home alone, the night made the trees seem to be creepy monsters.

Neither the dog or the cats could find its toys.

Neither the dog or the cats could find its or their toys.

Neither the dog or the cats could find their toys.

Neither the dog or the cats could find his or her toys.

The police and fire department arrived at the parade, where it kicked off the festivities.

The police and fire department arrived at the parade, where they kicked off the festivities.

The police and fire department arrived at the parade, where themselves kicked off the festivities.

The police and fire department arrived at the parade, where their kicked off the festivities.

My favorite Mexican food is guacamole it is very spicy.

My favorite Mexican food is guacamole, it is very spicy.

My favorite Mexican food is guacamole. It is very spicy.

My favorite Mexican food? Is guacamole it is very spicy.

After seeing the original Broadway production, the local adaptation was not fulfilling.

After seeing the original Broadway production, I was not fulfilled by the local adaptation.

After seeing the original Broadway production, the fulfillment of the local adaptation was not there.

After seeing the original Broadway production, the adaptation was not locally fulfilled.

Psychologists should review your patients' records carefully before them make a diagnosis.

Psychologists should review their patients' records carefully before you make a diagnosis.

Psychologists should review his patients' records carefully before they make a diagnosis.

Psychologists should review their patients' records carefully before they make a diagnosis.

She wore a bicycle that was too large helmet on her head,

She wore a bicycle helmet on her head that was too large.

She wore a bicycle helmet that was too large on her head.

On her head that was too large, she wore a bicycle helmet.

The soccer star kicked the ball from the corner, and watched it hit her teammate's head, she hoped it would get by the goalie.

The soccer star kicked the ball from the corner and watched it hit her teammate's head she hoped it would get by the goalie.

The soccer star kicked the ball from the corner and watched it hit her teammate's head. She hoped it would get by the goalie.

Watching from the corner, the ball hit the teammate's head where she hoped it would get by the goalie.

Having arrived late at practice, a written note was needed for the coach.

Having arrived late at practice, the coach needed a written note.

Having arrived late at practice, the note needed to be written by the player for the coach.

Having arrived late at practice, the player needed a written note for the coach.

Charlie spotted a lost dog driving home from work.

A lost dog, Charlie spotted driving home from work.

Driving home from work, Charlie spotted a lost dog.

A lost dog driving home from work was spotted by Charlie.