2nd Six Weeks Editing Review

(28) There’s no way to avoid Mondays, so join me in making the best of it.

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(26) I realize that I was probably not going to convince everyone that Monday is the best day of the week, but hopefully I can encourage a few people to change their attitude.

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(25) While last weeks topics may have been boring, Monday can bring a new book to read, experiment to conduct, or math concept to tackle.

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(20) For example, last week I got behind on my homework, and had to spend the weekend catching up.

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(15) And according to consumer websites Monday is the best day to get a good deal on a car because there aren’t as many people shopping on the first day of the workweek.

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(13) Furthermore, quite a few legal holidays, including Presidents’ Day, Memorial Day, Labor Day, and Columbus Day, they are celebrated on Mondays.

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(12) If you are a sports fan, you may get to watch Monday Night Football in the Fall.

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(9) I don’t agree with all these sentaments.

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(5) Songwriters has even written lyrics about dreading Mondays.

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