Creating a Coherent Argument

Dogs make excellent pets because they are loyal, loving, and can provide companionship. They can be trained to do a variety of tasks, such as fetching, sitting, and even protecting their owners. In addition, dogs encourage physical activity, as they need regular walks and playtime. Their ability to sense human emotions also makes them great emotional support animals.

Dogs are pets because running and playing outside is fun. Also, many people like their ears, and sometimes they bark. If you look at a dog, it might be brown, which is a nice color. Dogs can eat food, and when it’s sunny, they might roll in the grass. It’s important to know that dogs exist.

Which revision of the text is best?

These beliefs and media portrayals of peer pressure are wrong.

Which revision of the text is best?

Peer pressure is not always a bad thing. Peer pressure can have a positive effect on our lives.

Which revision of the text is best?

Peer pressure can lead us to make decisions that are good for our bodies.