Vary Sentence Structure

How will you write it? This was the original:

In the barn, there are many things to see. In the hayloft, hay bales are piled high. On the wall, there are tools hanging all in a row. In the pen, sheep make soft little sounds. Through the stall windows, the horses beg for sugar.

Let’s write

Write a description of this farm scene. In your paragraph, use a variety of short, medium, and long sentences. Do not begin all of your sentences the same way.

Write another description. It may be of the barn scene on page 9, or you may choose to describe something else. Keep in mind all of the ways to make your sentences different.