Editing Review

How should the sentence be changed?

Their is not much to do when you arrive.

Bright red berrys began to grow on shrubs, and tiny wildflowers started to dot the landscape.

What change needs to be made to this sentence?

Which word belongs in the blank?

I don't think _____ are any cookies left over for the rest of us! How rude!

(13) We will work hard so we can play hard after STAAR.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 13?

What change if any should be made to the following sentence?

Fred twisted his ankle, and scraped his knee.

Which word should be followed a comma in this sentence?

Although the teacher planned a fun lesson using technology the Internet connection was down that day.

If you _____ a phone, it probably _____ to Chris.

What transition should be added in the blank?

My Mom said her favorite place to eat is Chili's.________ we're going today.

What change needs to be made?

Henry drive his brother to practice after school.

Which transition word or phrase would BEST connect the two sentences?

Dad didn't have time to go to the store. There was no bread for sandwiches.

Shoe manufacturers use high tech materials to make shoes that are good for them.

You can make this sentence better by changing THEM to - 

What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 1?

(1) He sailed west on may 2nd.

Pick the sentence with no capitalization errors.

How should the following sentence be changed?

At night the member’s of a family gather in a warm, cozy huddle to sleep.

The trees stem became a thick trunk, and its bare branches were soon filled with leaves.

How can this sentence be changed?

What change if any should be made to this sentence?

 I wonder if its their birthday today.