The author is able to portray a suspenseful tone when he says, “My dear fellow,’ said the general, ‘there is one that can.’ ‘But you can’t-’ gasped Rainsford. ‘And why not” (Connell 11).

 “I refuse to believe that so modern and civilized a young man as you seem to be harbors romantic ideas about the value of human life. Surely your experiences in the war — ”(Connell 11).

They did not include the author's first name.

They did not introduce the quote with their own words.

They did not put the quotation mark after the period at the end of the sentence.

Three feet from the pit a man was standing, with an electric torch in his hand.¨ (Connell 19)

Many things from the story make the reader feel a certain way when 

reading like when Rainsford thought, “a gigantic creature, solidly made and black-bearded to the waist” (Connell 6).

"Three feet from the pit a man was standing, with an electric torch in his hand.¨ (Connell 19)

For example, the text states that Rainsford saw that General Zee was standing "Three feet from the pit" and he was holding "an electric torch in his hand¨ (Connell 19).

For example, the text states that Rainsford saw that General Zee was standing "Three feet from the pit" and he was holding "an electric torch in his hand.¨ (Connell 19)

Another part of the story that weirded me out on page 10 paragraph 95 when Rainsford said "No animal has a chance against me anymore” (Connell 10).

Another part of the story weirded me out was when Rainsford said "No animal has a chance against me anymore” (Connell 10).

Another part of the story weirded me out was when Rainsford said "No animal has a chance against me anymore.” (Connell 10)

"No animal has a chance against me anymore” (Connell 10)