Revising and Editing

JJ Watt believes if you work hard, you can make your dreams come true.

JJ Watt believes in hard work and dreams come true.

JJ Watt believes dreams and hard work.

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JJ Watt believes if you work hard, you can make your dreams come true.

JJ Watt believes in hard work and dreams come true.

JJ Watt believes dreams and hard work.

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My parents

The animals

Things we were looking for

Everything

The vampire bats are nocturnal mammals, which means they do their hunting at night.

The vampire bats are nocturnal mammals that means, they do their hunting at night.

The vampire bats are nocturnal mammals that means they do their hunting at night,

The vampire bats are nocturnal mammals because they do their hunting at night.

Change real to really real

Delete Did

Change Vampires to vampires

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Change the period to a question mark

Delete the comma after 2012

Change voted to vote

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Change go to went

Change than to then

Insert a comma after rollercoaster

Change left to leaved

The campsite was surrounded by tall trees, and we were right. Next to the lake.

When the campsite was surrounded by tall trees. We were right next to the lake.

The campsite was surrounded by tall trees. And we were right, next to the lake.

The campsite was surrounded by tall trees, and we were right next to the lake.

My brother and I, were ready to get on, but I chickened out at the last minute.

My brother and I were ready to get on, but I chickened out at the last minute.

My brother and I were ready to get on but, I chickened out at the last minute.

The sentence is written correctly.

Change I’ll to i’ll

Change to eat to too eat

Change your to you’re

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Change swiming to swimming

Change during to durring

Add a comma after during

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Delete the comma after said

Delete the quotation marks after the period

Change this to This

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However

For Example

Therefore

Finally