Writing an Introduction (Persuasive Letter)

Dear Someone,

My name is Kelley and I would like to have school year round. It would be fun!

Give this person feedback - what should they change?

Dear NASA,

My name is Kelley and I am a teacher at BMPCS. I think that having year round school would benefit everyone, especially students and their families.

Please give clear feedback for this wonderful student. What should she change? Why?

Write your OWN example of an introduction for this student. Who would be your audience? How would you introduce yourself? What information would you include?