Shark Week Revising and Editing

a. The ultimate edge for most shark species is their size and power.

b. Additionally, sharks are known to be skilled hunters.

c. If they sneak up on a dolphin while it’s crater feeding (dolphins bury their beaks in the sand to dig for prey), it can mean game over for the dolphin.

d. Sharks don’t appear to be picky eaters.

a. Delete the comma after However

b. Change strikking to striking

c. Change battle to batle

d. Change animals to animals’

a. Change than to then

b. Add a comma after species

c. Change usually to usualy

d. Change to to too

a. Change they’re to their

b. Delete comma after advantages

c. Change always to allways

d. No change should be

made in sentence 14.

a. Change OCEARCH to They

b. Change device to thing

c. Change shark to animal

d. Change it to the ocean

a. Change threw to through

b. Change tracks to track

c. Change Twitter to twitter

d. Sentence 6 does not need to be changed.

a. Change since to sense

b. Delete comma after tagged

c. Change east coast to East Coast

d. No change needs to be made

a. Change too to to

b. Change cruising to cruiseing

c. Change using to useing

d. No change needs to be made