Revising Sentences

change "there" to "their"

change "isn't" to "is"

change "them" to "it"

change "closely" to "closer"

change "is" to "are"

change "made" to "making"

change "especially" to "especialy"

No change is needed.

Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests, being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests: being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests, being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests. Being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

change "cat section" to "Cat Section"

change "customers" to "customer's"

change "friskyness" to "friskiness"

sentence 16 should not be changed

change the comma to a colon

insert "never" before "allow"

change "your" to "their"

No change needs to be made in this sentence.

Cat cafes are relatively new to America but have been popular. In other areas of the world for some time.

Cat cafes are relatively new to America and have been popular in other areas. Of the world for some time.

Cat Cafes are relatively new to America, but they have been popular in other areas of the world for some time.

Change "lived to "live"

Insert a comma after "room"

Change "properly" to "proper"

No change is needed in sentence 27

Change "parlour" to "Parlour"

Change "advance" to "advanced"

Change "large" to "larger"

Sentence 32 should not be changed.