Editing Personal Narratives

Write down three different things that are always capitalized.

List 5 other words you could instead of "said".

List five transition words.

Rewrite these sentences for clarity.

To begin with, we went to the store yesterday. Before that we are went to the movies.

Look at your first body paragraph. Pick a sentence that you can add to and type it below as it is already written.

Now retype that sentence, adding more details to add clarity for the reader.

Type an example of figurative language from your essay here. Please label what type it is.

Type an example of dialogue from your essay.

The type of marks you use around dialogue are called...?

Explain why you chose the answer on the previous question.