how to make a wonderful story

you will want to make the reader feel like they are with you. use strong but gentle words like damp breeze or the wind was cold as ice. those phrases will just make a reader understand how you feel and they feel like there right beside you. just 3 phrases can make a whole story better!

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here is some phrases; the wind was cold as ice, the wind blew across my face like a kid running in a field, and lots more. you always can look up phrases like if you can't remeber ice cold look up phrases with ice cold water. the wind was cold as ice should come up.