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The Writing Revolution in Elementary Grades

The Writing Revolution in Elementary Grades

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5th Grade

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​The Writing Revolution

Brian Healey, Secondary Social Studies Instructional Coach
bhealey@cdschools.org

​In the Elementary Classroom

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​Agenda:

  • Introduction

  • "WHY" of writing instruction

  • 6 Principles of the Writing Revolution (4)

  • "How" can I use this in my classroom

  • Resource Share

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Take 2 minutes and type 2-3 things that make teaching writing challenging in your classroom.

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​“... The problem is that American schools haven’t been teaching students how to write.  Teachers have assigned writing, but they haven’t explicitly taught it in careful sequence and logical steps, beginning at the sentence level” (Hochman and Wexler 2).

The WHY of Explicit Writing Instruction in Your Classroom

​“...“But writing is the hardest thing we ask students to do, and the evidence is clear that very few students become good writers on their own” (Hochman and Wexler 2).

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The WHY of Explicit Writing Instruction in Your Classroom

​Writing Instruction is Reciprocal with Reading Comprehension Abilities

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​"As students learn to employ more complex sentences in their oral and written language, their ability to make sense of what they read increases, too."
- Timothy Shanahan

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​Students need explicit instruction in writing, beginning in the elementary school (continuing into secondary)

​Sentences are the building blocks of all writing

​The content of the curriculum drives the rigor of the writing activities.

​Grammar is best taught in the context of student writing.

​6 Principles of The Writing Revolution (4)
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​#2
​#3
​#4

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The Sentence Level: The Basic Building Blocks of Writing

Why Sentence-Level Work?

“Sentence-level work is the engine that will propel your students from writing the way they speak to using the structures of written language. Once they begin to construct more sophisticated sentences, they’ll enhance not only their writing skills but also their reading comprehension” (Hochman & Wexler 24).


​A writer who can't compose a decent sentence most likely will not produce a decent essay - or even a paragraph.

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​Why Sentence level work?

Change This: "The Union army won."

​To This:  “In April 1865, the Union Army, a well-trained and well-equipped force, won a decisive battle against the Confederates at the Battle of Appomattox Court House.”

​(Hochman & Wexler 24).

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​The Sentence Level: Unscrambling Scrambled Sentences

​“Students enjoy rearranging jumbled sequences of words into correctly punctuated and capitalized sentences. At the same time, they’re developing and honing their grasp of the concept of a complete sentence, learning correct word order, and reinforcing their knowledge of the rules of punctuation and capitalization” (Hochman & Wexler 24).

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Example: apples Tim oranges bought and bananas

Solution: Tim bought apples, oranges, and bananas.

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Unscramble the Following Sentence:

their maximize writing embedded should students as practicing on possible to writing topics as benefits the content skills soon of students instruction start


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​The Sentence Level: Because, But, So

​Provide students with a sentence stem – the beginning of a sentence – and ask them to turn it into three separate complex sentences, using each conjunction in turn (Hochman & Wexler 40).

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  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president because (tells why)

  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president, but (change of direction OR thought)

  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president, so (indicates cause & effect)

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​The Sentence Level: Because, But, So

​Provide students with a sentence stem – the beginning of a sentence – and ask them to turn it into three separate complex sentences, using each conjunction in turn (Hochman & Wexler 40).

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  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president because

  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president, but

  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president, so

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​The Sentence Level: Because, But, So

​Provide students with a sentence stem – the beginning of a sentence – and ask them to turn it into three separate complex sentences, using each conjunction in turn (Hochman & Wexler 40).

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  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president because he kept the North united during the Civil War.

  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president, but many Americans didn’t like him while he was alive.

  • Abraham Lincoln was a great president, so more books have been written about him than any other American leader.

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​The Sentence Level: Because, But, So

​In Mathematics, instead of asking "What is a fraction?," you can give your students this stem:

Fractions are like decimals ________________________.
They might answer like this:

​Fractions are like decimals because they are all parts of a whole.
Fractions are like decimals, but they are written differently.
Fractions are like decimals, so they can be used interchangeably.

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​The Sentence Level: Because, But, So

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​*Differentiate*
Higher achieving students might not need these kernal sentences.
eg. "Give me three sentences [using the conjunctions we learned] about the Sioux and their Ghost Dance"

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​The Sentence Level: Because, But, So

​Another Way To Say It...

​But - Change in Direction
- Although
- While
- Even though
- However
- On the other hand

​So - Cause & Effect
- Therefore
- As a result
- Consequently
- Thus

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​The Sentence Level: Sentence Expansion

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​The Sentence Level: Appositives Practice

Brainstorm Appositives

​Jonas, __________________, experiences several changes throughout the story.

​an eleven-year-old boy

​the new Reciever of Memory

​an intelligent young man

the protagonist of The Giver

​a courageous child

a special member of the community

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The Sentence Level: Subordinating Introductions

You Try!


When the copier is jammed,


Because the student was wearing AirPods,


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The Sentence Level: Sentence Combining

You Try

New York City has many museums.


New York City has many restaurants.

New York City is a popular tourist destination.


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​Resources:
The Writing Revolution
Downloadable Lessons
Back to School Ideas
Templates (Can also be found on TWR website)
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​Questions??
Bhealey@cdschools.org
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​The Writing Revolution

Brian Healey, Secondary Social Studies Instructional Coach
bhealey@cdschools.org

​In the Elementary Classroom

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​Agenda:

  • Introduction

  • "WHY" of writing instruction

  • 6 Principles of the Writing Revolution (4)

  • "How" can I use this in my classroom

  • Resource Share

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