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Conclusion Paragraphs

Conclusion Paragraphs

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English

8th Grade

Hard

Created by

Joseph Anderson

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11 Slides • 10 Questions

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October 24th, 2023
Introduction and Conclusion Paragraphs

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Lesson Objective: Students will begin to form strong and cohesive introduction and conclusion paragraphs for longer essays.

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Facts about the introduction paragraph:

  • First thing your reader reads.

  • The introduction paragraph is where you "hook" your reader.

  • Introduction paragraph sets up information about your essay for your reader, giving them information they need to know.

  • Introduction paragraph contains a "thesis statement".

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​Your Introduction Paragraph

​Your Reader

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Multiple Choice

Which of the following is NOT a must-include for an introduction paragraph?

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A topic

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A claim that can be defended.

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A clear and defined correct and incorrect answer.

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A line of reasoning for your claim.

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Multiple Choice

Which of these is true about the "Introduction Paragraph"?

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The introduction paragraph is at the end of your essay.

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The introduction paragraph has the job of hooking in your reader.

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The introduction paragraph shouldn't contain the thesis statement.

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The introduction paragraph always contains both CDs and CMs from the text.

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Thesis Statements:

Your thesis statement should:

  • Answer the question: “What is the purpose of this essay? What am I asserting? What am I writing about?”

  • Be one complete sentence.

  • A strong thesis includes the following components:

    • A topic

    • A defensible claim.

    • A line of reasoning for the claim.

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Multiple Choice

Which one of the following is the best example of a thesis statement?

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While some people prefer the taste of tacos, burritos are clearly better when looking at all the qualities of both foods.

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There are a lot of opinions about this. Some people prefer the taste of tacos. But burritos are clearly better when looking at all the qualities.

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Burritos are best.

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Though some people like tacos, burritos are better because I said so.

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Visualizing Your Introduction

It’s good to think of your introduction as a funnel, that leads into your thesis statement.

Start with broad statements
that are related to your topic.
Then, as your introduction
continues, narrow your
perspective until you reach
your thesis statement.

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Reorder

Reorder the following sentences, using our "funnel" methodology, from the most "narrow-scope" to the most "broad-scope".

Your teacher

Your classmates

Your school

Your city

Your country

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Reorder

Here are sentences in an intro paragraph. Reorder them from the beginning to the end.

We are currently living in a world of constant discourse, both online and offline, where people will have prepared arguments for any debate one could think of, from the largest of conflicts to the smallest of petty arguments.

Sitting along with some of the most highly debated topics, stands a debate with  passionate members along both sides of the argument; the strong “tacos vs burritos” argument.

The world we find ourselves in is a world that cannot judge simply based on taste alone, but rather, people pick their choice of food item based on numerous additional qualities, such as texture, portability, and value per dollar.

Despite the near endless debate about the topic, however, it is clear that one pick is the clear winner over the other; While some people prefer the taste of tacos, burritos are clearly better when looking at all the qualities of both foods.

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Open Ended

With the knowledge of introduction paragraphs, work with your table groups to come up with some good thesis statements that cover how Martin changes how he feels during the course of the short story "The Medicine Bag".

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Conclusions aren’t easy!

There are three major purposes in a conclusion paragraph:

  • Reflect on the major points of the essay without renaming them or adding new information;

  • To provide a finished feeling to your essay; and

  • to leave your reader thinking about your ideas, and maybe even wanting to read more from you!


We have stressed the importance of the introduction paragraph to hook your reader, but it is also very important for you to be able to clearly finish strong, so your writing can have a lasting impact.

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Multiple Select

Which of the following are major purposes of the concluding paragraph?

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  1. To leave your reader thinking about your ideas, and maybe even wanting to read more from you.

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  1. Reflect on the major points of the essay without renaming them or adding new information.

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To cover any concrete details you couldn't cover in your body paragraphs.

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To provide a finished feeling to your essay.

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Take a look at this
visualization; much like we talked about the introduction being a funnel, the conclusion should logically do the same, but in reverse: from narrow (information about your essay) to broad (why it should matter to your reader).

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For the first sentence of your conclusion paragraph, you should restate the purpose of the essay, without repeating the thesis. Since your reader has all the context they need, you don't need to provide extra information.
Remind them of the purpose!

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Reorder

Reorder the following sentences of a conclusion paragraph in the correct order

(remember, small to big!)

It would be untrue to state as fact that tacos have no merits over burritos, and one can even be in the mood for tacos when their preference is burritos; however, burritos are the clear choice between the two foods when compared objectively.

Burritos are the choice due to their more easily portable nature, their more varied flavors, and their better cost-to-food ratio.

We are living in a world of constant motion and movement, oftentimes without even the luxury of sitting down and enjoying a meal.

Keeping this in mind, one should be considering all of the factors when picking a lunch to bring with them or to purchase for themselves, beyond merely taste.

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Open Ended

Take this example thesis statement; write a conclusion paragraph's first sentence based on it!

"Although there are many career paths available to those who do not go to college, it is still worth it to go based on the data and evidence"

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Open Ended

Take this example thesis statement; write a conclusion paragraph's first sentence based on it!:

"In "The Medicine Bag", though at first Martin was unsure about his connection to his culture, he grows to really love it."

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...The conclusion is your bow.

If your essay is a gift...

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Here's some bonus tips!

  • Start by restating your thesis (without repeating it! restate the idea or purpose of the essay!)

  • Draw a deduction (a thought or lasting impression) from the facts of the essay.

  • Reflect on the significance of the topic.

  • Pose a question on why it is important to your reader, or what makes it interesting.

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Now, on Google Classroom

Begin or continue to write your concluding sentence on the "introduction and conclusion paragraphs" assignment on your Google Classroom page.

October 24th, 2023
Introduction and Conclusion Paragraphs

​Do Now: Log into your Chromebook and join the Quizizz on Google Classroom.

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