DA 2 Review

​Revising & Editing Typing Question:

"In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way."

WE DO NOT USE A.C.E!!!! You are just revising and editing the sentence. So you have to "fix" the sentence by typing it the correct way.
YOU DO NOT HAVE TO PUT TEXT EVIDENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DO NOT PUT TEXT EVIDENCE!!!!!!!

• Mary does too.

• It is blue too.

• Whales do too.

​Incomplete

• Sarah and Isabel love baking cookies.

• The flag is red and white.

• Sharks and dolphins live in the ocean.

​Complete Sentences

Revising & Editing

Revising & Editing

​Combining sentences

When combining sentences we need to play close attention to what the two sentences mean. Sometimes we can add a comma and a coordinating conjunction. (F.A.N.B.O.Y.S). Other times we can combine ideas into lists using just commas.

Making a list using commas.

​Combine similar ideas using commas to form a list:

Ex: Sharks and dolphins live in the ocean. Whales do too.

All of these animals live in the ocean. To combine these sentences in a clear and effective way, we need to list them using commas.

Sharks, dolphins, and whales live in the ocean.