Writing SOL Review Composing & Revising Questions Pt 2

A. Joseph Banks saw on his voyage one of the plants that impressed him, it was the breadfruit tree.

B. On his voyage, Joseph Banks saw the breadfruit tree that impressed him - a plant.

Seen by Joseph Banks on his voyage and impressing him was one of the plants he saw, the breadfruit tree.

D. Joseph Banks was impressed with the breadfruit tree, one of the plants he saw on his voyage.

F. Every part that wasn't covered with rain gear of me was within minutes soaking wet.

G. Every part that wasn't covered with rain gear of me was soaking wet within minutes.

H. Soaking wet, within minutes was every part of me that wasn't covered with rain gear.

J. Within minutes, every part of me that wasn't covered with rain gear was soaking wet.

F. He had artistic talent and covered his dorm walls with his sketches.

G. His dorm walls, he had artistic talent and were covered with his sketches.

H. His sketches were covering his dorm walls, he also had artistic talent.

J. He had artistic talent his sketches covered his dorm walls.

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bring

assure

persuade

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Lots of Sarabande students have felt her super school spirit and personal support when she would check out sporting events to cheer us on.

Each year more and more students have felt her fabulous school spirit and support as the sweated it out at sporting events or games.

Tons of Sarabande students from past years have felt her school spirit and personal support as she heaped on the encouragement during a sporting competition or game.

Generations of Sarabande students have felt her school spirit and personal support as she inspired us to do our best during a sporting event or game.

turned

adapted

arranged

translated

developed

The feast could easily be held on a weeknight at school.

You have to let us hold the feast on a weeknight at school.

It would be so awesome if we could hold the feast on a weeknight at school!

What do you think about maybe holding the feast on a weeknight at school?

showed

offered

brought

introduced

Furthermore, I believe for the band this ideas to attend the state spring competitions could potentially generate enough money.

Furthermore, I believe this idea could potentially generate enough money for the band to attend the state spring competitions.

Furthermore, to attend the state spring competitions for the band, this idea could, I believe, potentially generate enough money.

Furthermore, for the band, I believe that this idea to attend the state competitions could potentially generate enough money.

Although I cannot name the cave because the owner of the farm restricts access to keep it pure, it appears to be no more than a large hold in the ground.

To keep the cave undisturbed, the owner of the farm restricts access and I cannot name the cave, but I can say that it appears to be no more than a large hole in the ground.

Although I cannot name the cave because the owner of the farm restricts access to keep is as undisturbed as possible, it appears no larger than a hold in the ground is what I can say.

I can say that the cave, although I cannot name the cave because the owner of the farm restricts access to keep it pure, appears to be no more than a large hole in the ground.