Writing an informal e-mail

​Ali 

Hello Ali how are you? I want to ask you about the next holiday because we haven’t see each other’s for a long time. Can you come to Bahrain this week? I really hope so!

That will be great so we can go to the national celebration and go to the fustival to eat dinner .

After that we can go out with my car and go to dessert and sit so we can watch the animals.

Nasser 

• Do you have all the e-mail parts? (subject, greeting, opening paragraph, main paragraphs, closing paragraph, sign-off)

• Do you have different paragraphs?

• Does each paragraph have at least 3 sentences?

• Did you use different punctuation marks? ? ! , . -

• Did you use capital letters?

• Did you use linking words? also, and, but, because, however, even if, if, so,...

• Are you being polite in your email?

• Is your email informal?

• Did you start your sentences differently?