5.11 c revise and edit

What is the sentence missing?

The boy to the park yesterday.

The subject is…

What correction can be made to the following sentence?

Kaitlyn and Todd played in the treehouse

What is the verb in the sentence?

My mom and I went to the grocery store.

What is the verb in the sentence?

Kimber ran her heart out on the field.

1.April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night.

2.With their dad.

3.april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

Which change needs to be made to this passage.

1.April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night.

2.With their dad.

3.april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

Which change needs to be made to this passage.

1.April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night.

2.With their dad.

3.april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

What is the best way to revise sentence 3?

1.i went camping with my family.

2.We whent fishing and I caught a big fish.

3.I also whent Swimming with my brother.

4.We hade a camp fire every night.

5.The camping trip was lots of fun

What changes should be made to the passage?

1.i went camping with my family.

2.We whent fishing and I caught a big fish.

3.I also whent Swimming with my brother.

4.We hade a camp fire every night.

5.The camping trip was lots of fun

What changes should be made to the passage?

Read the following paragraph and answer the question that follows.

(1) During the snowstorm ended, I decided to go for a walk in the park. (2) I wondered how much snow had fallen on the ground. (3) I put in my heavy coat and winter boots. (4) My mom bought me these boots last year, but they still fit. (5) Then I walked down the snowy sidewalk to the front gate in the park. (6) I was lucky someone had already shoveled the paths. (7) Because of that, I did not have to wade among deep snow. (8) Snow can be beautiful, but it’s a pain to walk through. (9) The trees looked magical with their branches covered of snow. (10) A hush fell near the park, and not a single sound could be heard. (11) Then I heard the faint call of birds on the distance. (12) After passing the pond, I began to head home. (13) I had lost track of time and arrived home before breakfast.  

There is an unnecessary sentence in this paragraph. Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?

(1) During the snowstorm ended, I decided to go for a walk in the park.

What change needs to be made in sentence 1?

(3) I put in my heavy coat and winter boots.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

(5) Then I walked down the snowy sidewalk to the front gate in the park.

What revision, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

(9) The trees looked magical with their branches covered of snow.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?

Read the following paragraph and answer the question that follows.

(1) We have two cats. (2) They think they’re in charge. (3) Turns out – they’re right. (4) When the cats want something. (5) They meow and make their voices herd. (6) Their names our Lucy and Ethel. (7) That’s because they’re best friends and they are always getting into trouble.

Which sentence could best be added before sentence 1 to improve this paragraph’s opening?

Many electrical appliances __________ destroyed in the fire yesterday.