Example: Many children in the 1970s have problem with their parents due to strict rules and regulations

=> Comparision: Now, parents are friends => discuss openly with parents, understand each other better

Improve family bonding

​Explain: allowed to make their own decision (such as choose their favorite subjects to study) => more chances to express their gifts and talents

Results: less pressure for children and parents.

​​Become creative

Explain: excessive liberty without parental supervision means the child may take the chance to do mischievous things, because they are curious and active.

Result: grow up and become undisciplined citizens, or worse, committing crimes.

Become disobedient

​Explain: letting children experience everything without accompanying them, paying them compliment or giving them the support they need.

Result: they become reckless with their parents and have little connection to the family.

Feeling a lack of care

"From my perspective, there are both advantages and disadvantages to this development, and so this essay will explain why it is neither a wholly positive nor negative trend."

​Answering sentence

"It is said that..."

"It is a popular fact nowadays that..."

"People claim/believe that..."

Paraphrasing sentence

SUGGESTED STRUCTURES FOR OPENING PARAGRAPH

"On the other hand/however, it could also be argued that..."

Negative

"On the one hand, the benefits that [sth] bring about (to someone) are various. One of the most obvious ones is ..."

Positive

SUGGESTED STRUCTURES FOR BODY PARAGRAPHS

SUGGESTED STRUCTURES FOR CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

• In conclusion, [sth] could result in [ negative factors 1 and 2]. Nevertheless, I oppine that its advantages such as [positive factors 1 and 2] are superior to its drawback.

• All in all, [negative factors 1 and 2] could derive from [sth]. Nonetheless, I believe that the benefits like [positive factors 1 and 2] that it offer are worth taking into account.