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A. Some people search inside a twisting model of the human brain. Because others walk past rows

of wooden towers that stand like soldiers in a field.

B. Some people searching inside a twisting model of the human brain. Others walk past rows of

wooden towers that stand like soldiers in a field.

C. Some people search inside a twisting model of the human brain, and others walk past. Rows of

wooden towers that stand like soldiers in a field.

D. Some people search inside a twisting model of the human brain. Others walk past rows of

wooden towers that stand like soldiers in a field.

A. Sarah opened her backpack. She didn’t find anything that would help them navigate.

B. Sarah opened her backpack. She didn’t find anything, that would help them navigate.

C. Sarah opening her backpack. She didn’t find anything that would help them navigate.

D. Sarah opened her backpack but she didn’t find anything that would help them navigate.

A. Sarah and Amber munched. Their snacks they felt better.

B. Sarah and Amber munched their snacks and felt better.

C. Sarah Amber munched their snacks and because of that they felt better.

D. Sarah and Amber munched their snacks then they felt better.

A. One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring. Happening to be the

perfect sea toy.

B. One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, and called a bubble ring. Then it happens to be

the perfect sea toy.

C. One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect

sea toy.

D. One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle. It is called a bubble ring, and it happens to be the

perfect sea toy.