Revise & Editing- Jupiter and the Bee

In time, humans learned of her treasures---

honey and beeswax---and began stealing from her hive.

In time, adults and children learned of her treasures---honey and beeswax--- and began stealing honey from her hive.

In time, men, women, boys and girls learned learned of her treasures--- hive stuff--- and began stealing honey from her hive.

In time, men, women, boys and girls learned of her honey and beeswax and began stealing it from her hive.

hardworking

honeybee

thieving

more

He granted her request with but a warning

He granted her request but with a warning

But granted he her request with a warning

But her granted her warning with a request