​Read the following sentence and look for errors.

In the final seconds of the game Craig past the ball to Travis, and then he tripped over his shoelace and broke his arm.

​Explanation

​In the final seconds of the game, Craig past the ball to Travis, who tripped and broke his arm.

​This is the most clear sentence because the word "who" refers back to Travis. If you put "he," that pronoun could refer back to either Craig or Travis.

​Read the following sentence and look for errors.

ms moon our Principal requested funds from the rotary club to buy computers for hiring a computer specialist and to open a computer center.

​To open= an infinitive

To Hire= an infinitive

Hiring= participle

When you use a list of verbs, they all must match. ​

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How can we make all of the verbs match to maintain parallel structure? ​

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