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​The picture represents the process of growing bananas for selling in supermarkets. Overall, it is apparent that there are seven main stages in the process, beginning with the growing stage and ending with the buying stage.  

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Moreover, the bananas are shiped in fridges at 13.3' degrees Celsius.​

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The given diagram represents the procession / procedure of growing bananas for sale in supermarkets. ​

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Subsequently, in the picking stage, bananas are cropped when they are still greenery.​

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Bananas are first grown from nine months to a year.  The temperature should be 25-30 and it is advisable to raise them in the rainy season as they need a lot of water.​

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ACTIVE OR PASSIVE ​

​The first step of the process begins when the banana trees grow up for between 9 months and 1 year with the temperature 25-30 degree Celsius and lots of rain.

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ACTIVE OR PASSIVE ​

The following stage is the shipping stage IN WHICH the bananas are required to keep in fridges at 13,3 degree Celsius​.

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Overall, it is apparent that there are seven main steps in the process, beginning with growing bananas and ending with bananas are bought by customers. 

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The following step involves the bananas are transported by ships through the ocean in 13,3 degrees Celsius in fridges.​

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AVOID REPETITION - SUBJECT

Moving to the checking stage, the good bananas are kept and bad bananas are thrown away.​

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AVOID REPETITION - SUBJECT

After that, it is checked in the checking stage with the good bananas being kept and bad ones being thrown away.​

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ARTICLES

As can be seen, the process consists of seven steps, beginning with growing stage and ending with buying stage.

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The next stage is to deliver bananas to supermarkets.  Finally, the customer buys bananas. 

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Subsequently, in the picking stage, the bananas are cropped when they are still green (adj). After that, green bananas are checked and selected.

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1/ The leaves and the stems are removed and then the stones is taken out with a metal spike. ​

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2/ After the quality of the jam is checked, this is put into jars.

3/ A lid is put on top of the jars to keep the jam fresh.

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4/ The next stage is bananas being harvested when they are still green, followed by the checking stage in which the good fruit is kept and the bad one is thrown away.

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