sentence b

​I felt super excited on the first day of my secondary school life.

Sentence A

Compare the following two sentences.

My heart beat super fast on the first day of my secondary school life.

• give readers room for imagination

• ​allow readers to form pictures in their minds

• visualize the descriptions​

The key of writing descriptions

Visualize? Visualization?

To ​make it simple, visualization is to show what happens, instead of telling what happens.

• describing actions

• describing the surroundings​

The key of writing visualized descriptions

sentence b

I am nervous on the stage when there are so many people.

Sentence A

#1 describing actions

My palm is sweating when I am on the stage looking at so many people.

sentence b

The house​ has left empty for long and that's why it was so dirty.

Sentence A

#2 describing the surroundings

T​he house has left empty for long and every piece of furniture is covered in dust.