What's wrong with the sentence?

​he be geting mad

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• ​You don't start a sentence with "he" - who are you talking about?

• ​The first word in a sentence is always capitalized.

• "Be" is not the correct actions word.

• ​The correct spelling is "getting."

• ​There should be a period at the end of the sentence.

​I think his thouts becase of what he think about.

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• ​Whose thoughts?

• ​The correct spelling is "thoughts."

• ​The correct spelling is "because."

• ​"think" should be plural, "thinks."

​he was brave end fout the monster and carryd grover and then his mom was gone.

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• ​Who is "he?"

• ​There should be a comma after brave.

• ​The correct spelling - "and" and "fought."

• ​This is a run-on sentence.

• ​Percy "carried" Grover -- where did he carry him?

• ​Percy looked back and his mom was gone.