Revision Stage

​Three good practices

​1. Walk away from the draft for some period of time!

​2. Have someone else read and provide feedback on the draft.

​3. Read Your draft out loud.

​Error: Modifiers

• ​Refer to Subjects may/may not be present in the sentence.

• ​Upon entering the hotel room, the room had a refrigerator.

• ​Upon entering the hotel room, I noticed the room had a refrigerator.

• ​Chris nearly drove seven hours from Asheville Jacksonville.

​Questions?

​Revision Process

three (or five) paragraph essay based on the brainstorming choices given in class. You must have a specific thesis, following the simple form of the essay structure, and have three reasons/examples to support your argument. This assignment must be word-processed; I will not accept hand-written submissions. The final draft will be submitted to focus. Your thesis choices (choose one) are the following:

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• Listening to music is a favorite thing I like to do.

• Watching television shows or movies is a favorite thing I like to do.

• Playing video games is a favorite thing I like to do.

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