Poetry Review

Parents often treat their kids like adults, forcing them to grow up too soon.

Kids are often expected to stay kids forever.

When kids take on more responsibility, they grow up faster.

Adults are not as compassionate or selfless as kids.

“my / mother has called me ‘an old soul.’ / I never understood.” (Lines 1-3)

“now that our family has / dwindled to just Mom and us kids, I’ve grown / into a man” (Lines 3-5)

“‘David, dig deep,’ / is the whisper in my ear.” (Lines 5-6)

“I try to be the / raft that helps carry them over this life’s rough rivers.” (Lines 7-8)

It develops a frustrated tone, as the speaker has no control over his situation.

It conveys an angry tone, as the speaker refuses to change his situation.

It introduces a resigned tone, as the speaker accepts his new responsibilities.

It establishes a proud tone, as the speaker feels good about his new responsibilities.