Writing CBA2 REVISION Review

1. The central idea of Roland’s paper is weak. Which of the following could replace sentence 3 and provide a better central idea for this paper?

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2. The word contained is not the right word for sentence 6. Which word would better help describe the outside of the hedgehog?

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3. Roland needs to use a more appropriate transition at the beginning of sentence 8. Which of the following should replace For example?

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4. Roland would like to add a sentence to the beginning of the fourth paragraph (sentences 11–14) to introduce the ideas in this paragraph. Which of the following would be the BEST sentence to add just before sentence 11?

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5. Which sentence should Roland add to the end of his paper to bring it to a better close?

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